"[Growing up] is hard and nobody understands." // https://www.homestuck.com/story/2391

Read a couple of Deadpool/Spiderman fanfictions today. One right after that last drop, and one just now. Main takeaway: Sparkling cohesion. Less (stylistic) fragmentation, possibly on account of the narrator strongly fixating on one of the characters at a time, and channeling their thoughts more closely. My narration tends to be more objective, which could be transferred over from the thousands of words I generated and edited in that script of Ladon and Orange. I imagine my final, final draft of Bluebirds and Emeralds will be written entirely by me, 9000 words and 10 scenes all in my head like a loop of yarn. code-davinci-002 seems good for prototyping, but maybe not final drafts. On the other hand, this could be because I’m still close to the writing process, and can’t quite get the chunks out of my head yet.

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