Wrapping up the pick the worms off me like sticky pearls draft. I think the shift is okay. But you can see really clearly where the rawness and vengeance and IMHO pretty beautiful descriptions of the island fade out for something more domestic. I do want to explore the grayer, darker sides of Ladon’s character and work in some consequences of his hotheadedness from earlier.
"[Growing up] is hard and nobody understands." // https://www.homestuck.com/story/2391