Sunday breakfast was to-go from Erik's DeliCafe, a decently sized area and quiet that morning.
Spent a good chunk of the day reading and watching up on the Prius C, and not driving. Figures!
Planned to have movie night after 8 at Canni's house, but she was still in Davis. Wish I did a little half hour drive regardless, but alas, that's tomorrow.
Wrote some more plot outline for Soteriology of the Coherent, asked the chatbots for help, they recommended I clarified the Luke and Hazel relationship that's so core to the story. I don't know how this story went from apostasy (1.0) to rebellion (2.0) to grief and tragedy (3.0). But it makes sense, and honestly, this is shaping up to be an even tighter plot than Clods. It's just a longer story than I'm used to writing. Thank goodness it's still epistolary, so I can handwave and hint away some action and detail, while keeping a rotating narrator voice.